Inspired by a certain player's request to receive criticism from myself, and my buddies on the DM team, I've decided I'd like to hear what you all thought of the "Red Snow" plot. Don't pamper my ego, give me pointers as to how you think my DM style could improve and how I can make the player experience better/more immersive/fun. I'm used to criticism (seeing as I do a creative writing degree) so don't worry about hurting my feelings, I don't have any. The criticism will only serve to make the next alt beginnings campaign (this summer) better for those involved. So, my PM box is open for spammage, so spam away.

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